I had quite a few people who asked if I would continue with Kyle and Erin this week, and since they asked so nicely, I will. We are still in Erin's POV this week, and we pick up right where we left off last week. Things are getting more steamy between these two.
“Say it, Erin. I want to hear you say it,” he urged her.
How could he have known she didn’t want control in the bedroom, that it was one of her fantasies? One that she’d thought of more than once while masturbating late at night. One that she’d never voiced to anyone, and here he seemed to just know. All day at work, she had to be in control. Tonight she wanted to be different. She wanted to shed those restraints.
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Niiiice ;) I would want to read on for sure. lol
ReplyDeleteOK, now what? Knowing you, Kyle is a very alpha male and if he takes control then Erin would so love it! Tantalising!
ReplyDeleteOh yeah!! I want more.
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Giving up control is one of my favorite tropes. And a man who "just knows" = awesome. Lovely nibble here!
ReplyDeleteHOT! That was very well done.
ReplyDeleteNice scene! I can see why everyone wanted more from these two!
ReplyDeleteMmm...would love to know how the rest of this scene plays out! A great Dom knows what his sub wants even if she doesn't, and even if she hasn't fully admitted it to herself. Yum-my!
ReplyDeleteMakes sense to me... :-) Good six!
ReplyDeleteSo hawt! Can't wait to see how the rest of this scene plays out.
ReplyDelete~Sarah
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Great 6- let loose girl...love it
ReplyDeleteWowsers...sounds hot!!
ReplyDeleteGirlfriend, I know that feeling.
ReplyDeleteHot and getting hotter! Great six!
ReplyDeleteSounds like she wants a different kind of restraints, lol. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHm. Yummy yummy yummy, and oh the anticipation.
ReplyDeleteThat's wonderful. More! More! Very clever.
ReplyDeleteAh, giving up control. Love it when characters learn to do that.
ReplyDeleteHot and fabulous writing! Keep giving up more! :)
ReplyDeleteVery sexy and I can only imagine the fireworks between these two once they really let go.
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I'm guessing she is about to get exactly what she wants. Lucky girl!
ReplyDeleteWow. He sounds amazing. Can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteOne of my favorite storylines, Alyssa, and you've got me wanting to read more about these two.
ReplyDeleteTantalizing.
ReplyDeleteHa! Submit! I's a sucker for a good D/s story.
ReplyDeleteVery hot!
ReplyDeleteDelicious, I love that she knows what she wants and so does he.
ReplyDeleteVery sexy. I definitely want to read more!
ReplyDeleteThanks Everyone!
ReplyDeleteSounds great!
ReplyDeleteNothing better than when a man takes control ;)! Brilliant six!
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Angela
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Oh, I'd love to read more!!
ReplyDeleteVery tempting and sexy!
ReplyDeleteVery hot! :)
ReplyDeleteHot six!
ReplyDeleteOh man- good stuff here- thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI like that idea - that she's comfortable enough to lose control around him.
ReplyDeletePassed you an award, fellow crusader! http://thegirdleofmelian.blogspot.com/2011/02/passing-on-awards-and-passing-on.html
Ah, the control fantasies are the best!!
ReplyDeleteAlso, I think I'm in love with your header picture!
Ooh sexy! Very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteHi, fellow crusader! I'm so glad she wants to change things a bit. Muahahaha! I wonder what Kyle'd think! XD
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I want more!!!
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ReplyDeleteThanks everyone!
ReplyDelete@ Tracy~ I'm with you and totally in love with my header.