Wednesday, February 9, 2011

WIP Wednesday





Here's this weeks little snippet from the current story I'm writing called Healing His Wife's Heart.

Natasha leaned a hip against his truck. He couldn’t miss how sadness crept into her eyes. Did she really want to go through with this, or was it too hard for her to think about it all as it still was for him? If he could, he’d take away the pain and make her whole again.

“Damn, I worried about that. I guess the sooner we re-file, the better,” she slipped her hands in her pockets and shifted her feet.

“Ok, I need you to listen to what I’m about to say. Actually, listen and don’t react. Do you think you can do that?”

“What the hell are you talking about, Chris?”

“I have a proposition for you.”

5 comments:

  1. Hi Alyssa!

    Nice hook! Dang it all to hell! *grumble - grumble* ;)

    M.

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  2. Murphy~ You'll just have to wait until I finish the book, and find a home for it.

    Nas~ I'm glad you want to read more!

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  3. Jennifer~ I couldn't resist teasing the readers this week. LOL!

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