Sunday, June 19, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 6-19-11




This week's Six Sentence Sunday comes once again from my work in progress, but from a different spot.

He moved to walk around her, and she resisted the urge to turn around, but barley. Fingertips caressed her shoulders for a whisper than they were gone. His body covered her back the warmth seeped into her, causing her breath to hitch. Steve snaked an arm around her waist. Fingers danced along her stomach ascending toward her breast. He cupped one through her bra kneading like he had all night and day to discover her body.

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11 comments:

  1. WOW- this line had my complete attention "His body covered her back the warmth seeped into her, causing her breath to hitch"
    Great 6
    Dawne P

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  2. This sounds like an amazing work in progress. great 6

    Sam

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  3. Excellent work, Alyssa. Looking forward to more.

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  4. Oh, wow, such great descriptions in the piece. Nice!

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  5. Great six. I look forward to reading more.

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  6. Nicely done. Got my attention!

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  7. Nicely done! Can't wait to read more!

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  8. Whew - all night and day? LOVE his slow hands.

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  9. At least he thinks, hopes, prays that he'll have the time to enjoy.

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  10. This is what I'm talking about- a man who has all night and day to discover her body.
    Great 6
    Dawne P

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