Sunday, June 26, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 6-25-11


This week's six comes from my book Road to Recovery it's available now. We see Kyle at a low point in his life.

Tears burned the back of his eyes. His knees shook and finally gave out. He dropped to the ground, his knees sinking into the mud as the pain gripped his heart, squeezing like a vice. He’d do anything to trade places with her. It should have been him. She was just an innocent child and didn’t deserve to die.

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10 comments:

  1. Oh wow. That's definitely a low moment. Poor Kyle :(

    Powerful six, Alyssa. Thank you for sharing

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  2. this is so sad and you really captured it. great 6

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  3. Poor Kyle! You conveyed his despair so well.

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  4. I remember that scene so well, very powerful!

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  5. Man, tough scene. His raw pain is very real. Great six!

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  6. Oh no! I'm too hormornal to read this, I teared up too. Great six.

    ~Xakara
    A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS

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